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Author Topic: [Sharing/Mix/Voc Crit] Male WKL - Run Devil Run  (Read 1327 times)

AsunaSasaki

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[Sharing/Mix/Voc Crit] Male WKL - Run Devil Run
« on: May 10, 2010, 11:52:23 AM »
I dont know about the other guys but could you please give me critics :D!

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Carlos - AsunaSasaki
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Ryan - RyanEatPho
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I got the name BKL (Wrong Korean Language) because I cannot pronounce any Korean I guess :D
« Last Edit: May 11, 2010, 09:24:07 AM by AsunaSasaki »

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Re: [Sharing/Mix/Voc Crit] Male WKL - Run Devil Run
« Reply #1 on: May 10, 2010, 05:13:01 PM »
This just proves to never record when I'm sick. :(
And is it ok if this isn't linked to my youtube channel? Thanks. :D

Umm... I'll critique later, yes?
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AsunaSasaki

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Re: [Sharing/Mix/Voc Crit] Male WKL - Run Devil Run
« Reply #2 on: May 11, 2010, 09:24:27 AM »
And is it ok if this isn't linked to my youtube channel? Thanks. :D

Sure, I didnt know if I should or not...

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Re: [Sharing/Mix/Voc Crit] Male WKL - Run Devil Run
« Reply #3 on: May 12, 2010, 04:48:49 PM »
I love it when guys take on a female song. :)
Im sorry, I dont know any of you, so I was really surprised when I heard male voices singing. But I enjoyed listening to this! I love the attitude you guys put into singing this!! *__*

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Re: [Sharing/Mix/Voc Crit] Male WKL - Run Devil Run
« Reply #4 on: May 12, 2010, 05:42:54 PM »
there's actually no harmony but a monotone track that plays at the same time. I made a version with that in the background so if you ever decide you would want to rerecord with full harmonies, you could add it in :D Take the very first note of the song, and sing the entire piece in that same note separately

http://www.mediafire.com/?fmydljoldzm
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Re: [Sharing/Mix/Voc Crit] Male WKL - Run Devil Run
« Reply #5 on: May 13, 2010, 10:55:04 AM »
@Amy thanks LOL

@Renna thanks for that! I actually didnt know that O_O Ill use it, if I do this song again :D!

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Re: [Sharing/Mix/Voc Crit] Male WKL - Run Devil Run
« Reply #6 on: May 15, 2010, 04:09:45 PM »
I dont really know many of you voices so sorry i cant point out who and who so if i get it wrong im sorry TT__TT
This song is really deep for me--i know how hard it can be the sing this ;w;, also!! I mean everything i mean in the nice way! Im not trying to be mean and sorry if it hurts feelings TT__TT Im just trying to help~ ^__^

Mixing:
The vocals were a bit loud~, other than that i think it was pretty good! certain times i heard a bit off timing on some things, but sometimes its with how they were sung like to fast or too slow and stuff, But also at the rap it was off for a second and quickly jumped back into rhytm;

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Louis - This voice was kinda nasally; It seems like your voice was a little bit off pitch a little -- I loved the attitude you had in your voice, and pretty good energy it made me smile! Remind me of jokwon cause of it! ^^

Carlos - I think you did some of the raps and i really liked them :D -- again sometimes your pitch watch for~~

Ryan--Your voice is pretty!! when you sang "bakkun yeoja" i thought it was so pretty *_* i think that you end your short lines too hard, instead of flowing them together if that makes anysence xDD;;  i think you had sunny's little solo as it started into chorus, it sounds so nice there~!

Koolmon- I cant really say anything TT___TT simply because i love your voice and i cannot find anything that i think that needing fixing, i hear at points your a little nassally, but your sick and this is wonderful for someone whos sick ;w;

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Re: [Sharing/Mix/Voc Crit] Male WKL - Run Devil Run
« Reply #7 on: May 16, 2010, 04:23:03 AM »
Mixing:
The vocals were a bit loud~, other than that i think it was pretty good! certain times i heard a bit off timing on some things, but sometimes its with how they were sung like to fast or too slow and stuff, But also at the rap it was off for a second and quickly jumped back into rhytm;

Mixing - Was quite hard to be honest cuz everyone has a different way of pronouncing so it was kinda hard especially with the rap I had to do it like that or it would be even worse LOL

 




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